
Wednesday, 21 October 2009
Song Name...
When it came to deciding on a new name for the song we intend to use I decided that the word 'pretence' would be appropriate as it is a word which is used quite often int he song. It also has connotations of a false relationship which is like a game of 'pretend'.
Inlays...





These examples of inlays have been taken from the dance genre as well as the pop/rock genre as our initial research was based on both.
- Artist is central to the frame
- Album title generally repeated
- Same or similar image to the front cover of the CD therefore similar codes and conventions can be applied to the inlay.
Artist Name...
After playing around with a few names we have finally decided on a name which we feel suits our artist. We wanted to do something similar to 'P!nk' who challenges the connotations of her 'name' as she doesn't fit any of the connotations of the work 'pink'. For our artist we want to challenge gender stereotypes to conform to our genre so we want a name which has male connotations as well as female connotations. It must also be edgy to engage the target audience.
We chose the name 'Syd Marie' as it has male connotations and by adding 'Marie' on the end it instantly feminises the male persona which is created by the 'Syd' part of the name.
Timeline for video...
Song name- Pretense
0-4 Introduction
Mid shot of the artist, central to the frame with a direct mode of address.
4 seconds to establish the artist.
(5-18 seconds is establishing the couple are together)
5-6 I’m stuck inside
Male going out of the door
7-10 I’m trapped I’m crying
Mid shot of female in the house sat on bed
11-12 I’m torn apartmale in a social surroundings
13-14 Inside I’m dyingmale is in social situation
15-18 And I can’t breathe I can’t think but I’m willing to do anything
flash back female is sat at home
19-22In a shop
23-25 Not to put your heart in pretence
female is looking at magazine
25-27 Every time I breathe
heavy sigh of female
27-31 Not to think about you every time I want to fall asleep
male puts his arm around the female
31-35 You beg the life you took away
puts down magazine and moves away
36-39 You suck the life right out of me
he comes up behind her, opressing
40-45 Return my heart to its respected place
walks out of shop ad
end flash back
46-47 Cant take the pressure
artist sings, hands in front of face, falls to ground
47-52 Cover my eyes so I cant see you
female covers eyes
53-54 Hiding the truth
close up of bottle being put in the bin
54-56 Consuming the booze
male still out having a good time
57-1:01 I cant be the best of me
female trying to sleep
1:02-1:04 So I’m willing to do anything
tossing and turning in bed
1:05-1:08 Not to put your heart in pretence every time I breathe
thinking about the male
1:09-1:12 Not to think about you when I want to fall asleep
dissolving images of him, can't get him out of her thoughts
1:13-1:17 you beg the life you took away
blocking out images
1:17-1:20 You sucked the life right out of me
blocking out images
1:21-1:28 Return my heart back to its respected place
sleeping
1:29-1:30 Can’t take the pressure
artist sings, close up shot, Pink 'So What' cover style, clenched fists
ARTIST SINGS: can only see the artists lips
1:31-1:34 He can’t seem to face himself
artists lips
1:34-1:37 He turns away crying for help
he turns his head away, in the street, evening but not dark
1:38-1:42 He’s changing more and more everyday
close up on artists lips
1:42-1:43 She loves him
two shot, the males in it and the artists lips are in it
1:44-1:46 But it wants to go away
close up on lips
1:46-1:50 You beg the life you took away
female stood at the door
1:51-1:54 You sucked the life right out of me
getting her life back, happy
1:55-2:01 Return my heart back to its respected place
throwing his things together
2:01-2:03 Can’t take the pressure
ARTIST SINGS
2:03-2:07 Give back the life you took away
female grabs males bags
2:08-2:11 You sucked the life right out of me
female (shutting) slamming door after pushing him out
2:12-2:17 Return my heart to its respected place
male slowly walking away- power
2:18-2:19 Can’t take the pressure
image fades out as music fades out
0-4 Introduction
Mid shot of the artist, central to the frame with a direct mode of address.
4 seconds to establish the artist.
(5-18 seconds is establishing the couple are together)
5-6 I’m stuck inside
Male going out of the door
7-10 I’m trapped I’m crying
Mid shot of female in the house sat on bed
11-12 I’m torn apartmale in a social surroundings
13-14 Inside I’m dyingmale is in social situation
15-18 And I can’t breathe I can’t think but I’m willing to do anything
flash back female is sat at home
19-22In a shop
23-25 Not to put your heart in pretence
female is looking at magazine
25-27 Every time I breathe
heavy sigh of female
27-31 Not to think about you every time I want to fall asleep
male puts his arm around the female
31-35 You beg the life you took away
puts down magazine and moves away
36-39 You suck the life right out of me
he comes up behind her, opressing
40-45 Return my heart to its respected place
walks out of shop ad
end flash back
46-47 Cant take the pressure
artist sings, hands in front of face, falls to ground
47-52 Cover my eyes so I cant see you
female covers eyes
53-54 Hiding the truth
close up of bottle being put in the bin
54-56 Consuming the booze
male still out having a good time
57-1:01 I cant be the best of me
female trying to sleep
1:02-1:04 So I’m willing to do anything
tossing and turning in bed
1:05-1:08 Not to put your heart in pretence every time I breathe
thinking about the male
1:09-1:12 Not to think about you when I want to fall asleep
dissolving images of him, can't get him out of her thoughts
1:13-1:17 you beg the life you took away
blocking out images
1:17-1:20 You sucked the life right out of me
blocking out images
1:21-1:28 Return my heart back to its respected place
sleeping
1:29-1:30 Can’t take the pressure
artist sings, close up shot, Pink 'So What' cover style, clenched fists
ARTIST SINGS: can only see the artists lips
1:31-1:34 He can’t seem to face himself
artists lips
1:34-1:37 He turns away crying for help
he turns his head away, in the street, evening but not dark
1:38-1:42 He’s changing more and more everyday
close up on artists lips
1:42-1:43 She loves him
two shot, the males in it and the artists lips are in it
1:44-1:46 But it wants to go away
close up on lips
1:46-1:50 You beg the life you took away
female stood at the door
1:51-1:54 You sucked the life right out of me
getting her life back, happy
1:55-2:01 Return my heart back to its respected place
throwing his things together
2:01-2:03 Can’t take the pressure
ARTIST SINGS
2:03-2:07 Give back the life you took away
female grabs males bags
2:08-2:11 You sucked the life right out of me
female (shutting) slamming door after pushing him out
2:12-2:17 Return my heart to its respected place
male slowly walking away- power
2:18-2:19 Can’t take the pressure
image fades out as music fades out
Lyrics from song...
I’m stuck inside
I’m trapped I’m crying
I’m torn apart
Inside I’m dying
And I can’t breathe I can’t think but I’m willing to do anything
Not to put your heart in pretence
Everytime I breathe
Not to think about you everytime I want to fall asleep
You beg the life you took away
You suck the life right out of me
Return my heart to its respected place
Can’t take the pressure
Cover my eyes so I can’t see you
Hiding the truth
Consuming the booze
I can’t be the best of me
So I’m willing to do anything
Not to put your heart in pretence everytime I breathe
Not to think about you when I want to fall asleep
You beg the life you took away
You sucked the life right out of me
Return my heart back to its respected place
Can’t take the pressure
He can’t seem to face himself
He turns away crying for help
He’s changing more and more everyday
She loves him
But it wants to go away
You beg the life you took away
You sucked the life right out of me
Return my heart back to its respected place
Can’t take the pressure
Give back the life you took away
You sucked the life right out of me
Return my heart to its respected place
Can’t take the pressure
I’m trapped I’m crying
I’m torn apart
Inside I’m dying
And I can’t breathe I can’t think but I’m willing to do anything
Not to put your heart in pretence
Everytime I breathe
Not to think about you everytime I want to fall asleep
You beg the life you took away
You suck the life right out of me
Return my heart to its respected place
Can’t take the pressure
Cover my eyes so I can’t see you
Hiding the truth
Consuming the booze
I can’t be the best of me
So I’m willing to do anything
Not to put your heart in pretence everytime I breathe
Not to think about you when I want to fall asleep
You beg the life you took away
You sucked the life right out of me
Return my heart back to its respected place
Can’t take the pressure
He can’t seem to face himself
He turns away crying for help
He’s changing more and more everyday
She loves him
But it wants to go away
You beg the life you took away
You sucked the life right out of me
Return my heart back to its respected place
Can’t take the pressure
Give back the life you took away
You sucked the life right out of me
Return my heart to its respected place
Can’t take the pressure
Song!!
We have now chosen a song which we will base our artist and all the products on.
(http://www.unsigned.com/casondrakay)
We chose this song because we found it to be quite similar to La Roux's song 'In for the kill' and this is the kind of song we have had in mind for quite some time now. We have also decided to lean towards the electro-dance scene as opposed to pureoly dance music as we found this to be too broad a genre in which there are actually more male unsigned artists than female artists.
(http://www.unsigned.com/casondrakay)
We chose this song because we found it to be quite similar to La Roux's song 'In for the kill' and this is the kind of song we have had in mind for quite some time now. We have also decided to lean towards the electro-dance scene as opposed to pureoly dance music as we found this to be too broad a genre in which there are actually more male unsigned artists than female artists.
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