This is another mock up CD cover. We need to make a few alterations to this as there is no direct mode of address and the copy isn't as clear as we would like it to be. I also feel that to use the ! in the name would be trying to communicate to the audience that there is a likeness to P!NK. This is not desirable so we have had to rethink this idea.

Also the cartoon heart needs to be photoshopped again as the outside line is too thick and the colour doesn't fit in with the rest of the cover. It would be preferable if the artist was higher up the cover too.